A Fakedex from the Buizel Boy!

[Blade Flight]

Posted this on OI, but I wanted more opinions than theirs!

I had my friend over today, and we decided to make a fakedex!

These are new starters for a region I made a while ago. The region was for Pokémon Stardust, a Ruby ROMhack I was planning on making (a plot-sequal to Platinum). Anyway, my friend drew three starters for the region, but I still need ideas! I might even sprite these!

The Pokémon are shown below. They are currently just lineart, but I'll color them eventually...:


http://i51.tinypic.com/xstmr.png


Alright, now to explain them!

*Mazrael, the Grass-type Praying Mantis Pokémon. This is the only Pokémon that Joshua drew that I like the name AND final typing of! Final evo is Grass/Dark (otherwise, it'd just be a glorified Parasect/Leavanny >_< Grass/Bug FTL).

*Cori, the Fire-type Manticore Pokémon. I would like help on a better name for this one; however, I'm keeping the final evo's type (Fire/Poison). Interesting fact: the males will have small beards, while females have no beards and longer hair tufts. The one in the picture is a female.

*Harmene, the Water-type Sea Anemone Pokémon. I would like a better name AND a final evo typing for this one! However, I might just go with Water/Electric, as Dragonfire suggested, but Water/Psychic or pure Water would work, too (FYI, I was thinking "Eynemi" or "Eye + Anemone" was a better name...).

Besides that, we need ideas for the trio, legendaries, and fossils...and, of course, help with these three!

Thoughts/comments?

[ImmunityBow]

Wouldn't Mazrael be primarily Bug before anything else, since it's a bug? Even Parasect is only grass really because of the mushrooms on its back. I like the concept, and the name (though I can't guess how it correlates to a praying mantis), but perhaps you'd want to keep that as a wild Bug Pokemon rather than force the concept as a starter? Cori's concept is clever, and I think the name is fine. As for Harmene, as a water Pokemon its concept is fine, I think. Water/Electric or Water/Poison would seem the two fitting typings, given the sting of sea anemones.

[Blade Flight]

Hmmm, you have a point, IB, about Mazrael. Its name is derived from "mantis" and a demon's name that my friend uses for his stories ("Azrael"). I would be satisfied with Cori, but I cannot think of any other names that actually suggest it's a Fire-type.

Glad you like them, though!

[Blade Flight]

Made this with inspiration from XTS/AB/Chimera.

http://i55.tinypic.com/rmoehj.png

Don't know what to name it, but Copsee/Copseed might work...(it's a "helicopter seed")

[Cranky Guy]

At first, I thought Mazrael was a bug/dark type Pokemon.

[Blade Flight]

At first, I thought Mazrael was a bug/dark type Pokemon.

Not on its own, but it evolves into one.

Anyway, I finally am getting around to adding four more fakemon that I already added on OI, but I'm not up for doing that right now. =|

[Cranky Guy]

I have been on to sketching a lot of fakemon lately. Would it be OK if I posted some pics?

[ImmunityBow]

You can post it on your own topic, so as not to hijack this one.

[Cranky Guy]

No, I don't mean that way. I meant to see if P-kang x was interested in having any of them in his fakedex before I burn all of them sketches into ashes.

[Blade Flight]

First off, please spell my name right (it's a pet peeve of mine). Second, I'll have to see them first, so please do make yourself a topic so I can see them.

[Cranky Guy]

Sorry about the name. It is one of my habits.

[Blade Flight]

Back, because I'm pretty sure my girlfriend won't make an account here, and I'm giving her credit anyway for the last drawing.

http://i52.tinypic.com/242ie11.png
Unnamed jail imp sorta thing. My friend (not girlfriend, a different friend) is redrawing the ball and chain. Dark/Steel OR Dark/Fighting, since we might remove the ball entirely.

http://i54.tinypic.com/t9furk.jpg
Vinling and Vinfreek, the Grass-type Thorn and Grass/Dark-type Grapevine Pokemon. Friend is redesigning Vinfreek, would also like a better name for it.

http://i53.tinypic.com/2mhztcm.png
Polyana, the Water-type Anemone Pokemon. Water-type first-stage evo, we're not sure what type to make it once it evolves again, but since it's Harmene's evo, it's definitely got Water in there. And speaking of Harmene...
http://i54.tinypic.com/slh7xz.png

Now THIS beauty of an art piece was drawn by my girlfriend. It's absolutely wonderful, isn't it?

Comments, mebbe?

[Cranky Guy]

That piece of Harmene artwork is really a............ good piece of artwork.

Polyana looks more like a 100%FEMALE...... But you could say the same about Mr.mime though.... Anyway you might wanna fix Polyana's feet. They look strange. And it should be water/poison.

As for Vinfreak...... How about about naming it Vinshriek?

[Blade Flight]

And it should be water/poison.

This will not be happening, since the Fire starter's final evolution is Fire/Poison. =P

[Cranky Guy]

That is a problem. How about water/electric? It's the oonly logic thing that I can think of for an anemone.

[ImmunityBow]

My compliments to your girlfriend on her Harmene drawing. It's really awesome that she'd get involved in your fakedex like that.

[Blade Flight]

She does amazing art, believe me. Like this picture of a male AND female Cori!

http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/Hellhoundwarden/CoriMnFFinished.jpg

[Cranky Guy]

I like the art but Cori seems quite big for a starter in that picture. Other than that, it is a really good artwork.

[DD818]

good job