Seraph Concept Cellshading

[DracoNyon]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r89/slashezz/SeraphCellshading.png

There is the artwork. I think it is a whole lot better than my other attempt. Although, I fear I re-sized it too small. As Always criticism and comments are welcome. Just got done with my last AP test today so I thought I would celebrate by drawing the new Seraph.

[NyteFyre]

I can't really tell where it's mouth is, nor where it's nose is...but other than that, it looks great!

[Merlin]

yeah i agree...

[zeroality]

Looks like you didn't use watercolor style art this time which is an improvement in my eyes. The halo doesn't look very three dimensional though, it looks like it's attached to his wing. Maybe if you fix that and the problem mentioned above then it could be a very nice piece of art.

[DracoNyon]

okay I will see what I can do with the halo. I don't understand the mouth thing though. The nose is curved line on the face and by the looks of the sprite there doesn't seem to be any indication that there even is a mouth. Lots of pokemon don't have mouths though like slugma or macargo.

[ImmunityBow]

I think it looks pretty good. The halo looks like it should be lower, yes.

[DracoNyon]

So here is the latest version. I hope it is better.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r89/slashezz/seraphnew.png

[zeroality]

Is that the version that's in the poll?