Flaafy

[Black Temple Gaurdian]

Post ideas for Flaafy here.

[ketty]

FLAAFFY has fur that stores electricity from thunderstorms that have passed, it loves its owner and will do anything for them

[Blade Flight]

Ketty, instead of making generic entries that poorly describe odd aspects of the Pokemon (which could be used for ANY Pokemon with that "love" part), why not look at the other entries that have been made and base yours on them?

"FLAAFFY's skin has a rubbery texture where not even peach-fuzz fur can grow. When threatened, it releases a massive amount of electricity from the orb on its tail."

Tried taking a canon entry and rewording it, then adding a newer part about the tail orb.

[PokePoindexter]

I like Pikang's, personally.

[ImmunityBow]

Okay, why not. PikangX's is a good idea, though here's another one:

After a few brave attempts, fashion designers have stopped making suits out of FLAAFY's wool. The wool's current was found to have odd effects on brains, forcing the wearer to baa and prance about.

[OddCrow]

I love that one IB. Perhaps slightly edited to

After many brave attempts, fashion designers had to stop making pieces using FLAAFY's wool. The wool crackled with a beautiful electrical current, but had odd effects on the wearer's brain, causing them to baa and prance about.

I think I might have over-inflated it a little. :/
I really like both of them, the idea is great.

[ImmunityBow]

I keep on getting the feeling that VBulletin 4's text-box size is slightly smaller than the old forum's, so it's easier to get past that 2-line limit.

While it's a great idea that the electrical current made it beautiful and desirable, I feel that maybe you're trying to fit in too much information into the space we have. Usually we have two tidbits that relate but you have three. I like it a lot but for length issues we might have to leave it out.

[OddCrow]

FLAAFY's wool crackles with a beautiful electrical current. However, using the pokemon's wool as clothing was banned after many incidents where the wearer would inexplicably baa and prance about.

Maybe a little better?

[ImmunityBow]

FLAAFY's wool crackles with a beautiful electrical current. However, making its wool into clothing was banned after several incidents where the wearer would inexplicably baa and prance about.

It doesn't seem as encyclopedic though. This version is a lot more subjective.

[Cyndadile]

I like that version.

[SilentSentinel]

As do I. It's pretty unique.

[Quinn]

that one makes me laugh. It reminds me, about a year ago...someone made another funny one with growlithe.

[NyteFyre]

I have to agree, it is funny, and different, both of which i like in a dex entry!

[Cranky Guy]

I like pikangs entry.

[Cranky Guy]

If you are talking about the growlithe entry about people stepping on growlithes tail, than that one was mine.

[zeroality]

I'll go with IB's and that makes 5 votes.

[ImmunityBow]

Flaafy: FLAAFY's wool crackles with a beautiful electrical current. However, making its wool into clothing was banned after several incidents where the wearer would inexplicably baa and prance about.