Miltank

[Black Temple Gaurdian]

Post ideas for Miltank here.

The milk drawn from a healthy MILTANK is said to be creamy and delicious. Although it looks cute and harmless, MILTANK can release a powerfull ROLLOUT attack that can crush anything in its way.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused a stampede of mothers dashing to buy some for their children.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study shows that the milk taken from it contains more vitamins and calcium than ordinary milk.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused its price to rise greatly as parents rushed to buy some for their children.

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold at 100% profit.

[Cranky Guy]

The milk drawn from a healthy MILTANK is said to be creamy and delicious. Although it looks cute and harmless, MILTANK can release a powerfull ROLLOUT attack that can crush anything in its way.

[ImmunityBow]

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused a stampede of mothers dashing to buy some for their children.

[Cranky Guy]

Ummm, IB yours is OK but I really think that the second sentence belongs in a Pokedex, especially the part about the stampede of mothers. How is this?

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study shows that the milk taken from it contains more vitamins and calcium than ordinary milk.

[ImmunityBow]

That's... really generic.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused its price to rise greatly as parents rushed to buy some for their children.

[Cranky Guy]

Better than the first.

[Cyndadile]

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. There have been many inconclusive studies as to the actual properties of its MOOMOO MILK.

OR

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

MOO.

[Cranky Guy]

I like Cyndadiles first.

[ImmunityBow]

"There have been many inconclusive studies as to the actual properties of its MOOMOO MILK."

I don't see this appearing in an encyclopaedia. They're supposed to give information, no? Not information stating that no information has been found, especially with something as mundane as Moomoo Milk.

[Cranky Guy]

The problem is that your entry, IB, doesn't really fit into a pokedex. I'm gonna try a splice.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

I think it's supposed to be OK.

[OddCrow]

2 clauses aren't connected. My attempt.

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold at 100% profit.

[SilentSentinel]

I'd say that's my favorite one right now. It alludes to the Moomoo farmers.

[Cranky Guy]

Oddcrows entry is good but I think you may wanna change "100% profit".

[NyteFyre]

instead of '100% profit', how about 'for a very high profit', or 'for a very good profit', or something more like that? 100% just sounds a little too over the top....

[OddCrow]

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

[ketty]

MILTANK produces a famous drink known as moomoo milk wich is known to be the reason why miltank can run so fast

[NyteFyre]

that one sounds good, Odd...

[Blade Flight]

MILTANK produces a famous drink known as moomoo milk wich is known to be the reason why miltank can run so fast

News flash: Miltank don't run BECAUSE of their milk. That entry is like saying Lemonade makes Cherubi more powerful (you know, since they're both fruit-related?)

Also, everyone knows that Miltank makes Moomoo Milk.

[ImmunityBow]

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

This idea seems to be working out best. It's not a bad one either.

[NyteFyre]

agreed, it goes along with the general dex entry idea based upon Human-Pokemon interactions...

and i just plain like it

[Cyndadile]

MILTANK makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. When happy, it can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

Thought I'd try making it fit with hte style a bit more (pokemon name in sentance one). Or I'm just trying to get it comfirmed sooner. You tell me.

[Quinn]

I like it, except the business partner part. When I read that, no kidding, I pictured a miltank in a tie, dressed formal.

[Cyndadile]

"I want 90% of the profit. Are you in?"
"MOOOOOOOOO."
"Good. You can buy youself a nice cowbell with your money."
"MOOOOOOOOO."
"Okay, now just-"
*MILTANK used ROLLOUT*
"Whaaa- AAHHHHHHH! 80%! 70! 60! 50! JUST DON'T-"
*CRACK*
"I can't feel my back..."
"MOOOOOOOOO."

I can see what you are getting at, but I don't think it will have a huge effect. Can you think of any alterantives? Maybe "but is often exploited for the milk it produces"?

[Cranky Guy]

MILTANK makes a great companion but is often exploited for the milk it produces. When happy, it can can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

Maybe. Maybe not.

[zeroality]

lol'd @ Cyndadile's post. cranky guy, that's actually not bad at all.

[Cranky Guy]

Why thank you. I got it from Cyndadile.

[ImmunityBow]

That looks fine to me. I can imagine a Team Rocket Miltank Exploitation Facility appearing somewhere.

[zeroality]

That's 3 votes, any more?

[NyteFyre]

I like it.

[Quinn]

hell, works for me. I'm not much of a miltank user (I'm for the bull!), so it wont be seen too much for me. But still sounds good.

[Cranky Guy]

Im good.

[Cyndadile]

I am in agreement.

[Cranky Guy]

It's done, right?

[ImmunityBow]

Yes.


Miltank: MILTANK makes a great companion but is often exploited for the milk it produces. When happy, it can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.