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Black Temple Gaurdian
01-04-10, 02:05 PM
Post ideas for Clefairy here.

Tyrannigon64
03-25-11, 10:16 PM
Due to its star-like shape, CLEFAIRY is believed to be a descendant of JIRACHI. As such, it is believed to be able to grant wishes, but this has been proven false.

zeroality
03-28-11, 12:27 AM
Same problem as Slowking+Shellder, only it's more prevalent here. I think we want to avoid entries that reference another Pokemon at random.

I don't like that one at all anyway, it takes something away from both Clefairy and Jirachi IMO.

I suck at coming up with original entries though so I'll leave that to someone else.

PokePoindexter
04-04-11, 08:25 PM
Legend has it that CLEFAIRY landed on Earth during a meteor shower 10,000 years ago. Many cave paintings have been discovered depicting it falling out of the sky.

ImmunityBow
04-05-11, 01:19 AM
Could we try something other than cave paintings? C/K's caves must look like the Sistine Chapel by now. I like the entry otherwise.

zeroality
04-05-11, 01:22 AM
Awesome.

Edit: IB ninja'd.

Yeah change the cave stuff but I like it otherwise.

PokePoindexter
04-05-11, 07:30 PM
How's this instead:

Legend has it that CLEFAIRY landed on Earth during a meteor shower 10,000 years ago. Ancient stone tablets often depict it falling out of the sky.

ImmunityBow
04-06-11, 01:55 AM
The "often" seems off to me. Why would it be often? it seems a little hand-wavy. Just removing it doesn't work either, since the two sentences don't flow into each other that well. I don't mind ancient stone tablets though, those are fair game to use.

zeroality
04-06-11, 08:06 AM
Legend has it that CLEFAIRY landed on Earth during a meteor shower 10,000 years ago. Ancient stone tablets that depict it falling out of the sky lend credence to this theory.

Irot_Rebod
04-06-11, 04:25 PM
+1 to zero's.

Tyrannigon64
04-06-11, 06:50 PM
I think too many of our Pokedex entries talk about prehistory. Is it possible to avoid that?

Cranky Guy
04-07-11, 05:18 AM
CLEFAIRY are believed to have came to the Earth during a meteor shower 10,000 years ago. They can execute a variety of attacks to surprise it's enemies by using METRONOME.

ImmunityBow
04-07-11, 11:19 PM
I really like Zero's though. Just to count how many reference ancient history:

Arcanine (it's just in passing though): "It has been loved since ancient times for ___"
Remoraid (this one almost doesn't count): "For millenia it relied upon MANTINE..."
Espeon (this one definitely counts): "In ancient times, Espeon was worshipped..."
Lapras (this also counts): "Cave depictions..."
Relicanth (this one couldn't really be anything but)
Jirachi (legendary)
Wolvine (this one absolutely doesn't count): "Grounded in ancient martial arts doctrine, it can disarm as easily as it can destroy opponents in battle."
Quiisord (Nearly unnoticeable): "Early fencing came about from..."
Khaphix (one-off desert Sphinx Pokemon)
The fossil Pokemon (What else?)
Neichia (legendary)
Typhidna (legendary)
Kipporok (legendary)

16/200 Pokemon, that makes just about 8% so far. If you don't count that ones that should very obviously reference ancient times or that are legendary that brings it down to 6/200, which is more like 3%. Only two non-legendary, non-ancient Pokemon (Lapras and Espeon) very explicitly reference ancient times when they could reference something else instead.

Just something to think about.

zeroality
04-08-11, 12:48 AM
So back to the issue on hand, that makes +2 right?

ImmunityBow
04-08-11, 05:40 PM
Yes.

Reliability
04-08-11, 09:20 PM
+3

Cyndadile
04-09-11, 01:00 AM
+

Reliability
04-09-11, 01:04 AM
Clefairy: Legend has it that CLEFAIRY landed on Earth during a meteor shower 10,000 years ago. Ancient stone tablets that depict it falling out of the sky lend credence to this theory.