Venonat

[Black Temple Gaurdian]

Post ideas for venonat here.

[Reliability]

I think the concept works a little better for Venonat, no?

VENONAT is unusual among butterfly and moth type POKEMON in that it does not have a cocoon phase. Instead, it buries holes in the ground, and emerges with its wings fully formed.

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[Tyrannigon64]

Sure.
-(-1)

[Black Temple Gaurdian]

It's great, but I'm not voting until there's another option.

[zeroality]

I'm with BTG, that's a bit dull.

[Reliability]

VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects VENONAT it from the falling temperatures at night. This allows VENONAT to conserve energy it would normally use to warm itself to find food.

[ImmunityBow]

Yes, I like the concept. Though it's a tad long.

[Tyrannigon64]

VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects VENONAT it from the falling temperatures at night. This allows VENONAT to conserve energy it would normally use to warm itself to find food.

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[Reliability]

VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects it from the falling temperatures at night. Energy it would normally use to warm itself VENONAT uses to find food.

Edit serves both purposes.

[NyteFyre]

Sounds good to me.

[Tyrannigon64]

+1

[Reliability]

Two more votes are needed to pass this (or one, if IB is a yes).

[ImmunityBow]

I'm a yes.

[Cyndadile]

VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects it from the falling temperatures at night. This allows VENONAT to devote energy to finding food rather than to warming itself.

I thought sentance 2's structuring was a little strange. If no one else prefers this, I'll make the last vote for Reli's edit.

[Tyrannigon64]

I change my vote to Cyn's.

[Reliability]

Yes to Cyn

[ImmunityBow]

Or actually the second VENONAT seems entirely unnecessary:

VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects it from the falling temperatures at night. This allows it to devote energy to finding food rather than to warming itself.

[Reliability]

Revoting sucks. But yes.

[Tyrannigon64]

Revoting sucks. But yes.

[Cyndadile]

Yep.

[MeekRhino]

Yes +1

[ImmunityBow]

That seems about enough:

Venonat: VENONAT's hair retains body heat and protects it from the falling temperatures at night. This allows it to devote energy to finding food rather than to warming itself.