Ninetales

Very calm natured. If anything pulls one of its tails, NINETALES will lay a thousand year curse on them.

Their tails have a supernatural power, different for each. If one of these tails are grabbed, then it lays a 1000 year curse.

These POKEMON are very intelligent and can understand human speech. One myth says that 9 wizards merged, creating NINETALES.

Their tails are embedded with a power that can let them live for 1000 years. During their life, their coats turn glimmering gold.

NINETALES is incredibly proud and devious, and will only obey a trainer it deems it worthy of raising it. It seems docile at first glance, but it can have a darker disposition on the inside.

Though this POKEMON is a very calm nature, it gets very agitated when anything pulls one of its tails. When that happenes NINETALES lays a 1000 year curse on them.

NINETALES never forgets a moment where it was wronged. One that has been wronged greatly, and many times develops a reddish glow in its eyes, as well as a caustic disposition.

The first entry totally contradicts itself, and they all seem to be saying the same thing (except the third). I'd do something more like this:

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NINETALES is incredibly proud and devious, and will only obey a trainer it deems it worthy of raising it. It seems docile at first glance, but it can have a darker disposition on the inside.

I think Nintendo wanted Ninetales to look nice and docile more than it does a calculating creature.

I know they are. that is so people get the same idea, but with some different ways to say it.

I do see your point on number 1 Let me redo it.

Though this POKEMON is a very calm nature, it gets very agitated when anything pulls one of its tails. When that happenes NINETALES lays a 1000 year curse on them.

Or with a different ending...that is kinda random

Though this POKEMON is a very calm nature, it gets very agitated when anything pulls one of its tails. These tails let NINETALES live at least 1000 years

Im gonna try and help.

NINETAILS,despite its looks,has a very devious nature and will only heed towards someone it thinks is worthy to be its trainer. If a person is foolish enough to pull onto one of its nine tails,a thousand year curse will be layed upon that person.

Maybe its a tad to wordy?

NINETALES never forgets a moment where it was wronged. One that has been wronged greatly, and many times develops a reddish glow in its eyes, as well as a caustic disposition.

IB yours sounds kinda strange if you ask me.

I still prefer either mine or IBow's. I like the idea of Ninetales being some sinister, calculating Pokemon full of vengeful ideas.

Yeah, my impression of Ninetales when looking at its flavour, sprite, moveset, is "Grudge", and I enjoy having a Pokemon with such a clear theme.

NINETALES makes a great companion for those who wish to appear important. If a person touches the pure white coat without permission, they run the risk of having a thousand year long curse placed upon them.

NINETALES makes a great companion for those who wish to appear important.

I think it's been well established that I really dislike references to Pokemon as particularly good companions to anything. There's also the issue of length.

NINETALES never forgets a moment where it was wronged. Those who commit misdeeds in its sight report suffering nightmares of burning, red eyes.

Yes!

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Originally Posted by ImmunityBow

Yes!

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agreed with above Cyndadile.