Miltank

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The milk drawn from a healthy MILTANK is said to be creamy and delicious. Although it looks cute and harmless, MILTANK can release a powerfull ROLLOUT attack that can crush anything in its way.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused a stampede of mothers dashing to buy some for their children.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study shows that the milk taken from it contains more vitamins and calcium than ordinary milk.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused its price to rise greatly as parents rushed to buy some for their children.

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold at 100% profit.

The milk drawn from a healthy MILTANK is said to be creamy and delicious. Although it looks cute and harmless, MILTANK can release a powerfull ROLLOUT attack that can crush anything in its way.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused a stampede of mothers dashing to buy some for their children.

Ummm, IB yours is OK but I really think that the second sentence belongs in a Pokedex, especially the part about the stampede of mothers. How is this?

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study shows that the milk taken from it contains more vitamins and calcium than ordinary milk.

That's... really generic.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. A study showing a small link between drinking its MOOMOO MILK and running ability caused its price to rise greatly as parents rushed to buy some for their children.

Better than the first.

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. There have been many inconclusive studies as to the actual properties of its MOOMOO MILK.

OR

MILTANK produces a nutrient-rich milk that is said to strengthen bones and muscles. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

MOO.

I like Cyndadiles first.

"There have been many inconclusive studies as to the actual properties of its MOOMOO MILK."

I don't see this appearing in an encyclopaedia. They're supposed to give information, no? Not information stating that no information has been found, especially with something as mundane as Moomoo Milk.

The problem is that your entry, IB, doesn't really fit into a pokedex. I'm gonna try a splice.

MILTANK can run at great speeds despite its bulk. Its MOOMOO MILK is a favorite among children and POKEMON alike.

I think it's supposed to be OK.

2 clauses aren't connected. My attempt.

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold at 100% profit.

I'd say that's my favorite one right now. It alludes to the Moomoo farmers.

Oddcrows entry is good but I think you may wanna change "100% profit".

instead of '100% profit', how about 'for a very high profit', or 'for a very good profit', or something more like that? 100% just sounds a little too over the top....

This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

MILTANK produces a famous drink known as moomoo milk wich is known to be the reason why miltank can run so fast

that one sounds good, Odd...

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Originally Posted by ketty

MILTANK produces a famous drink known as moomoo milk wich is known to be the reason why miltank can run so fast

News flash: Miltank don't run BECAUSE of their milk. That entry is like saying Lemonade makes Cherubi more powerful (you know, since they're both fruit-related?)

Also, everyone knows that Miltank makes Moomoo Milk.

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This Pokemon makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. A happy MILTANK can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

This idea seems to be working out best. It's not a bad one either.

agreed, it goes along with the general dex entry idea based upon Human-Pokemon interactions...

and i just plain like it

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MILTANK makes a great companion, and an even better business partner. When happy, it can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

Thought I'd try making it fit with hte style a bit more (pokemon name in sentance one). Or I'm just trying to get it comfirmed sooner. You tell me.

I like it, except the business partner part. When I read that, no kidding, I pictured a miltank in a tie, dressed formal.

"I want 90% of the profit. Are you in?"
"MOOOOOOOOO."
"Good. You can buy youself a nice cowbell with your money."
"MOOOOOOOOO."
"Okay, now just-"
*MILTANK used ROLLOUT*
"Whaaa- AAHHHHHHH! 80%! 70! 60! 50! JUST DON'T-"
*CRACK*
"I can't feel my back..."
"MOOOOOOOOO."

I can see what you are getting at, but I don't think it will have a huge effect. Can you think of any alterantives? Maybe "but is often exploited for the milk it produces"?

MILTANK makes a great companion but is often exploited for the milk it produces. When happy, it can can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.

Maybe. Maybe not.

lol'd @ Cyndadile's post. cranky guy, that's actually not bad at all.

Why thank you. I got it from Cyndadile.

That looks fine to me. I can imagine a Team Rocket Miltank Exploitation Facility appearing somewhere.

That's 3 votes, any more?

I like it.

hell, works for me. I'm not much of a miltank user (I'm for the bull!), so it wont be seen too much for me. But still sounds good.

Im good.

I am in agreement.

It's done, right?

Yes.

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Miltank: MILTANK makes a great companion but is often exploited for the milk it produces. When happy, it can produce up to 5 gallons of MOOMOO MILK a day, which can be sold for a high profit.