Jolteon

I can remember I had two entries, but I can only remember what was said for the second one:

JOLTEON runs at incredibly fast speeds, making it look like a large yellow blur. When agitated, this POKeMON releases enough electricity to cause massive power outages.

That one was my favorite out of the two anyway.

Yes, same for me.

"JOLTEON's fur can absorb almost any form of electricity, this trait has unfortunatly lead to several major blackouts. When running, the static electricity arcing off its fur makes it appear as nothing more than a yellow blur."
Bit long, but...

Since I cant remember the other one he did had before ill vote for pokepoindexter's now.

Did the tropius one get officiallized? It was just about to before this.

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Originally Posted by Black Temple Gaurdian 750

"JOLTEON's fur can absorb almost any form of electricity, this trait has unfortunatly lead to major blackouts. When running, the static electricity arcing off its fur makes it appear as nothing more than a yellow blur."

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I shortened it.

There's a problem with that one. After "electricity" you should have a full stop, and that makes 3 sentences.

I think you should replace "When running" with "While running".

The Tropius one had enough votes, and was going to be officialized anyway within a day. I'll put it up unless someone disagrees.

Bumped cause it has 4 votes.

Okay, I'll give it a day.

4-1 in favor of the first right now.

well, i'll gp ahead and vote for the first one...BTG's is a bit too long...