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    SMEARGLE's art skills are better than any artists when it comes to painting. The color of the paint on its tail is said to symbolize its personality.

    SMEARGLE are known for their extreme elusiveness. When a collector attempts to capture one, their reward will often be a splatter of paint in their face.

    SMEARGLE is renowned as a better painter than most human artists. The color of the paint on its tail is said to reflect its personality.

    SMEARGLE are well known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some SMEARGLE have been trained to do portraits of people, but these paintings tend to be very expensive.

    SMEARGLE are well-known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some SMEARGLE have been trained to do portraits of people, and these paintings are often sold for very high prices.
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    SMEARGLE's art skills are better than any artists when it comes to painting. The color of the paint on its tail is said to symbolize its personality.

    Whaddaya think?

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    SMEARGLE are known for their extreme elusiveness. When a collector attempts to capture one, their reward will often be a splatter of paint in their face.

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    I like cranky guy's, but perhaps with an edit to make it a bit less redundant:

    SMEARGLE is renowned as a better painter than most human artists. The color of the paint on its tail is said to reflect its personality.

    ...though I'm not sure how often a Smeargle would even bother painting something along the same lines as a human, so I don't know where we're getting that comparison from.

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    SMEARGLE are well known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some SMEARGLE have been trained to do portraits of people, but these paintings tend to be very expensive.

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    Actually, I like Cyndadile's a lot. Just a minor tweak to make it a bit more encyclopedic:

    SMEARGLE are well-known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some SMEARGLE have been trained to do portraits of people, and these paintings are often sold for very high prices.

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    Oh yes, the latest edit is very nice. However, I do think that it might be a little better to replace "and these paintings" with "which", which would reduce length and avert saying "painting" twice.

    SMEARGLE are well-known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some SMEARGLE have been trained to do portraits of people, which are often sold for very high prices.

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    That edit works well.

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    Im feeling weird IB. I thought you did not like to repeat the pokemons name twice in an entry.

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    Yes, now that you mention it you're right. Just simply removing the SMEARGLE from the second sentence works out perfectly fine.

    SMEARGLE are well-known by art collectors for their amazing painting abilities. Some have been trained to do portraits of people, which are often sold for very high prices.

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    You can do it twice depending on the actual content.

    This entry works for me.

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    Same as ^

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    Agreed. I really like this entry.
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    Seems done:

    Smeargle: SMEARGLE is well-known by art collectors for its amazing painting abilities. Some have been trained to do portraits of people, which are often sold for very high prices.

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