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    Default Cherp Cherp!



    It's Fincherp! (I know the face pattern doesn't match the sprite. But trust me, it doesn't work out if you try to match the sprite)

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    It looks great
    I think if you edit it 2 things could be improved.
    lengthen it's shortest wing feather a wee-bit, and
    maybe give it a single horizontal ruffle in it's chest feathers.
    But, yeah like I said, it looks really good.

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    I agree with OddCrow's recommendations and the foot (on my left), his right, seems very flat - maybe it needs shadow or something?

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    Something like this?


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    Fantastico!

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    I just noticed that the foot does have a 'leg' sticking out of it but maybe make it just a wee bit bigger? That would give the foot a more realistic appearance as it seems like it's just tacked onto the body. Same foot I was talking about before, his right.

    Then it would be perfect.

    Edit: Just noticed the shadow between his beak. What is that?

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    Okay then, I'll try.

    That shadow was a product trying to gradate the mouth and my mouse slipped. I didn't notice until after I saved and such and erased it but when I made the edits I went back to an earlier file and forgot it was still there. I'll get rid of it.

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    IB, you might consider making the toes go straight up instead of bendy because it looks like Finchirps legs are twisted.

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    That would make them too flat.

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    That's about as good as you can get without a tablet. Nice job.

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    it looks good, but the egg shell looks a bit bland...being all one color gives it that sort of generic feel, making some splotches, or maybe even coloring it close to what Fincherp looks like might help...it's just one 16 year old's opinion though...
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    well i see that it looks great and i do agree about the eggshell needing to be a little less bland but it does look pretty good to me...
    if you do this will the egg that Fincherp hatches out of have the same color/design as the one he's in or will it be similar to togepi where it'll look like the other eggs???
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    Probably like Togepi's, considering that every other egg is the same.

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    gotcha...
    i know they made the manaphy egg(is it manaphy-i get them mixed up) is different from the others but then again that's a legendary so i guess it would be kinda different...
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