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    Because it is often seen lurking in landfills, some people claim GRIMER is actually the result of toxic mutation from trash. It has been proven that they don't appear in cleaner areas nearly as often.

    GRIMER's body of sludge is actually the result of some toxic mutation from trash. The more it gathers around trash the more smelly its body becomes.

    GRIMER is thought to be the result of high levels of pollution in industrial areas. This is because it is most commonly seen around Collosus City.
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    GRIMER's body of sludge is actually the result of some toxic mutation from trash. The more it gathers around trash the more smelly its body becomes.

    This is kinda hilarious to me.

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    GRIMER is thought to be the result of high levels of pollution in industrial areas. This is because it is most commonly seen around Collosus City.

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    Im liking pokepoindexters right now.

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    I like that one too.

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    Yeppers. PokePoindexters is kinda good. It has my vote.

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    Popoi's is best. That's 5 votes.

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    Yes, it does seem to be the best. I'll give it a day.

    One more thing, for the purposes of formality I'll be replacing "don't" with "do not". I know that contractions are really often used in Pokemon but just stylistically it would seem better to b e more formal for an encyclopedia.

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    So my rewritten entry:
    Because it is often seen lurking in landfills, some people claim GRIMER is actually the result of toxic mutation from trash. It has been proven that they do not appear in cleaner areas nearly as often.

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    Yes. Done.

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