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    @BTG: As I said, no left crop. Your sprite is entirely unacceptable if you realize that that left icicle is cutting off into thin air. You see how it looks right now? It'll look like that in the game too.

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    It's a WIP, had school so I couldn't continue (5 A levels, what the hell was i thinking?).

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    Okay.

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    You've made the left one too small. It should be larger.


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    No it shouldn't. If I'm right and it's on the left shoulder it'd be further away and thus, smaller. Not to mention it may be at a different angle to the other one since the shoulder blade'd be in a different position.

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    I'd like it if the spike-thingy on the left was higher and larger.

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    Better. I think you still have a bit more leeway in terms of moving the right icicle further right, which would help it not look as cramped. It does look better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Temple Gaurdian 750 View Post
    No it shouldn't. If I'm right and it's on the left shoulder it'd be further away and thus, smaller. Not to mention it may be at a different angle to the other one since the shoulder blade'd be in a different position.
    It shouldn't be as small as it is. Right now, even accounting for perception, it looks tiny in comparison. It really shouldn't be much smaller anyway, since it isn't far from one shoulder to the other. Probably no more than three pixels.


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    It's awful, but I really just wanted to get it done. -.-


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    It's a very brave attempt with some good points. I actually think it's better as a placeholder than your Unicrown one.

    I think that most of the right side is fine, and that this is a wonderful starting point since it's such a difficult Pokemon to convey.

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    If you removed the head which is facing towards the player then it would look really good.

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    The only issue is that I'm already a head short. There are supposed to be seven, and that's only six right there...


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    I think Goldrake is good, but there is something too fat about Arowana's head. Or something. THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT IT IS!!


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    Liking goldrake, I'm not sure how to fix Arowana though.

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    you mean like the fact that Arowana's eyes are too small, and have no visible pupils, his head is too small compared to the front sprite, and i swear that snout is too small looking...Also, something seems awkward about that arm and hand...like it's bent farther up on the inside for some reason.
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    Goldrake's good, nicely done. Arowana needs a closer crop, I think, zoom it in a lot so you see mainly head and neck, more head than anything. If it fills the space enough I think you can better get that huge feeling from it.

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    :/ I know something's wrong.

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    It's very zoomed in. Maybe you want to half the size? Turn it into a gif file first.

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    Only Reefrain and Misticade are left.


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    Is there any I can do? I know I'm a new member but I might be able to help

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reliability View Post
    Only Reefrain and Misticade are left.
    SO feel free to do those if you like to scratch sprite.
    But there are lots of others that need editing, if that isn't your thing. Refer to the first post of this topic. I'm planning to do the ones that aren't ready to be placeholders yet (the ones that aren't on the repository). Most of those sprites can be found in the Summer Project thread if you want to see them.


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    Ok I know this is really bad but this could be a starting point... [IMG]back sprite starter.PDN[/IMG]

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    How do I upload it

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    You'll need to use an image hosting site, like Imageshack/ or Photobucket. You just have to upload it to that site, then set the URL it gives you in IMG tags.


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    ok here it is its definantly needs edits but may be a starting point ( head colors are freaked out)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reliability View Post


    I think Goldrake is good, but there is something too fat about Arowana's head. Or something. THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG AND I DON'T KNOW WHAT IT IS!!
    Maybe its because the flab from the chin straight to the lower throat give it more of a neck and cut down on some flab.

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    ...I'm not completely sure what that is. It isn't a sprite, that much I'm sure of.

    Sprites would be much smaller, would be built pixel by pixel. Also, a back sprite would only be viewed from the back.


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    [IMG]
    OK I know I barley edit these but I feel like it gets rid of that clumpy feeling...

    Sorry about the size I cant get Paint.Net to resize it without bluring it so you have to click it to see it...
    Last edited by Shahin; 10-26-10 at 03:27 AM.

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    Done.

    IB, ones in this topic: which aren't good for repository?


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    Let's see...

    Metusk (It really needs to be raised so you can see more of it)
    Arowana (IMO you focused too much on the body and so it looks a little puny, a closer crop should fill the space better and less awkwardly)

    That's it.

    I forgot to mention: Zantilidae is entirely awesome, great kudos.

    Awesome, awesome work, Reliability! This is quite the milestone!

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    sory IB i totaly forgt about that inflare back sprite ( freekin school )
    I'm backish, i think at least

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    NEXT THING:
    Edit the ones that aren't yet ready for the repository, so that the damn thing can be full. And that will be really nice. There are 11 of them:




    The critiques of these are in either this topic or in the Summer Project topic.
    But as I said in the beginning, any sprite still on the list of non-officialized ones is up for edits. These are just what I'm going to be doing. :/


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    How do I upload a thumbnail? I made an inflare back sprite but it only has a left arm and a head... I know my last one wasn't even a sprite but this is A LOT better

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    Does the upload site you're using not have an option for it as they usually do? But you shouldn't need to upload it as a thumbnail, if you stick to the 80x80px size they'll be as small as the rest of the ones in the thread anyway, and they'll be the right size.

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    By curving the neck, the jaggedness of the outline looks a little reduced. Also, it allowed me to add some of the body, which I think was the other thing someone wanted.
    Or:

    Emphasizes hugeness.
    Last edited by Reliability; 10-27-10 at 08:01 PM.


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    Both Brontogons are way, way better. Now it's up to the public to decide which one's the best. I'm thinking the last one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shahin View Post
    How do I upload a thumbnail? I made an inflare back sprite but it only has a left arm and a head... I know my last one wasn't even a sprite but this is A LOT better
    [IMG] Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/IMG]

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    Shahin, I can't even tell what that is...no offence.

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    I say the large one, so it doesn't take up so much battle area space, especially in double battles.
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    ...it would take up the same amount of space as all the other ones. It's the same dimensions.

    And Shahin, here is the current Inflare backsprite:

    If you want to try and improve on it, you can go ahead, but its one of the best ones we have IMO, and you might be better suited to re-do one of the ones that aren't at that level, like Embear, Grizlare or Tellure.


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