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    Post ideas for Koffing here.

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    KOFFINGs body is filled with toxic gas that helps it to stay inflated. Scientists say that these POKEMON are actually helping the ecosystem by ridding the air of dangerous gases that can harm trees and other organic life.

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    KOFFING absorbs toxic gasses from the air to keep itself inflated. Because it releases these gasses in the same form, whether KOFFING is a benefit or hindrance to the environment is heavily debated.


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    I like yours a lot, Reli. Was going to try one, but I can't think of any ideas of my own...

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    I also like Reli's change to cranky's.
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    Reli's is good.
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    Length is an issue here.

    KOFFING absorbs toxic gasses from the air to keep itself inflated. Since it releases these gasses in the same form, whether KOFFING's effect on the environment is heavily debated.

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    Ah, then I would go with your reduction, IB. Though could we remove the "whether" in the second sentence?

    KOFFING absorbs toxic gasses from the air to keep itself inflated. Since it releases these gasses in the same form, KOFFING's effect on the environment is heavily debated.
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    Whether made no sense, so I'm with that - although gases is the proper spelling, not gasses.

    KOFFING absorbs toxic gases from the air to keep itself inflated. Since it releases these gases in the same form, KOFFING's effect on the environment is heavily debated.
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    Yeah, the whether should actually be removed, it doesn't make sense without two options. As such:

    Koffing: KOFFING absorbs toxic gasses from the air to keep itself inflated. Since it releases these gasses in the same form, KOFFING's effect on the environment is heavily debated.

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