Scorchion new sprite (starting)

[Quinn]

I'm really gonna need some help with perfecting this, both with comments and with actual "help"
but here is what there is so far
(dont laugh to hard)
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd123/quintinbruderer/MyScorchion5-23-10.png
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd123/quintinbruderer/MyScorchionColorStart5-23-10.png

[ImmunityBow]

Its not bad. The main body area (the black part) should probably be thicker though. At least thicker than the tail.

[Quinn]

I'm gonna wait till the end of this week to pull this one back out. I'm gonna have a complete Hiker Clause week. (and the last of the work)

[zeroality]

You are definitely improving with each sprite you make but I don't think it's better than what we have up right now. :(

[Quinn]

I could just revamp the old one. (save myself much heartache)

[zeroality]

Why are we changing it? I forgot.

[Quinn]

first, it is a Possible change, and 2, although it is really good, it just doesn't seem to fit with a name of scorchion. Its a flame type so it should have some way of burning stuff rather than just having some red color to it. I was thinking a flaming tail tip and/or claws and/or the mouth.

[X-Antibody]

I don't really think that Houndour and Houndoom hinted much fire type other than their colour either. Though it would be funny to see Scorchion try to breathe fire 8D