Suggestions

[Zenith]

Don't we only have 11-12 Light types? It just seems like Light would work better with an E4 member.

To be honest, I'm a little worried about having 12 gyms. If we pull it off right, it would be amazing, but it has to be done in a way that doesn't make it feel like there's too many. Depending on whether the Champion focuses on a type or not, there will be either 16 or 17 types covered, which means if we have more than one under-represented type, we're in trouble. We'll also need to make at least a couple more towns, so there are more that don't have gyms. We can't have it feel like the gyms are everywhere; there needs to be enough civilization around to justify having 6 of them on each half of the map. Remember how Kanto & Johto only have two cities in each that don't have gyms? Hoenn has six, and it adds a lot of depth to the region. Not to mention that there is way too much uninterrupted horizontal space in Kirant.

What part does Mandy play in the story? Personally, I'd rather keep Fernando if we have to get rid of one (or move one to the E4). The Venap line would keep a resistance and lose a weakness (in Dionare's case, a double weakness).