I like IB's (sorry for the long pause. My computer brokedown.)
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I agree with MI about omitting the "and so" for the flow of the sentence. I thought it might help to separate the clauses, but I could be wrong. About "and therefore"... I'm not sure.
Alternative/compromise:
Legends speak of JIRACHI creating the lands of CALDERA and KIRANT as a result of a wish. There have been no official sightings since, so its current location is unknown.
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I like IB's (sorry for the long pause. My computer brokedown.)
I like MLEXs version.
Agreed, best version yet.
I like it (MLEX's).
Good enough:
Jirachi: Legends speak of JIRACHI creating the lands of CALDERA and KIRANT as a result of a wish. There have been no official sightings since, so its current location is unknown.