To clarify, was the main problem the lack of black in the outline or in the body?

EDIT: Also, w00t, second! Still mostly sober from a drinking game (I kept winning), so I know that winning sometimes isn't the greatest thing and umm... I'd like to thank both Umbreon and Darkrai for their participation, Miltank and Regigas for their cooperation - even if it didn't work out, and Ampharos and Luxaray for the commitment.