PERSIAN is a popular POKeMON among wealthy families because of its elegant fur. It has a truly devious mind, however, making it difficult to raise as a pet.
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It has an elegant air, but under the beautiful fur, it has a wild side and can attack without reason.
They are common pets. POKEMANIACS buy PERSIANS with brighter Jewels to show off.
This POKEMON is very temperamental. Anything that antagonizes it, it attacks with all force.
(ragingprimape) PERSIAN have become accustomed to living in the most luxurious of homes. They are a favored pet of the very wealthy
PERSIAN is a popular POKeMON among wealthy families because of its elegant fur. It has a truly devious mind, however, making it difficult to raise as a pet.
A PERSIAN's fur is very elegant and soft. Even though it is usually temperamental, a PERSIAN that is bred by a good person will become gentle and friendly.
Last edited by ImmunityBow; 01-01-10 at 03:33 PM.
PERSIAN is a popular POKeMON among wealthy families because of its elegant fur. It has a truly devious mind, however, making it difficult to raise as a pet.
A PERSIAN's fur is very elegent and soft.Even though it is usually tempereamental,a PERSIAN that is bred by a good person will become gentle and friendly.
Not my best.Definately not my best.
PERSIAN mate based on the brightness and cleanliness of their partner's fur. Due to this, PERSIAN have adapted methods to avoid getting dirty in all of their routine activities.
Hmm... still somewhat awkwardly worded, but maybe it'll spark something in somebody's brain.
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yeah, I agree, Reli. It sounds like a fine rewording. Doesn't really sound awkward to me.
Rewording for singular:
PERSIAN is considered a more suitable mate the cleaner and brighter its fur is. It has adapted methods to stay spotless regardless of the task it performs.
Singular rewording +1
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Yup, sounds good.