I've got Frostorm up. I'll do Nimbolt next. There isn't really much I can do about Cummuloft's face.
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I think Destado looks awesome. Cumuloft's face looks a little awkward, but it'll do.
I've got Frostorm up. I'll do Nimbolt next. There isn't really much I can do about Cummuloft's face.
Actually, before I do Nimbolt, I need to know; are his lightning bolt's solid or can they move in the animation?
They can move, if you'd like.
I've got Nimbolt done! I've made icons for the whole Cirroft evolution chain!
Nicely done! Thanks for your work!
You're welcome! I'll try and work on more whenever I get the chance.
Wow, great work! I'm impressed with what you have done. I look forward to more work from you! :P
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I now have Jackalant and Phantern in my album. Sorry they're out of order...
Looking good.
I put up Flintusk and Metusk. I tried to do Allufang, but it when I tried, it looked like a walrus XD
Good job! I especially like the Phantern one.
Flintusk and Metusk look fine, but I have a request for Metusk. Can you try picking your favourite sprite of the two frames and just moving the trunk as the second frame?
Alright, it should be up in a minute or two. I'll have both second frames for Metusk so that other people can choose what they like better, so it's not just your opinion. I personally prefer what I originally did, but I'm happy with either one.
Edit: It's now up on my album.
Smallard and Mallarge are on my album.
Smallard and Mallarge are passable though I don't think they're quite as good as the rest of your stuff. I like the new Metusk frame better but could see a case for the old one.
So wait a minute, is the rest of my stuff good enough to be in Pokemon Topaz? Also, what's wrong with my Smallard and Mallarge? I want to know so I can fix it.
I'm pretty sure the rest of your stuff is good enough. You've had some good response from a fair few people on this topic.
I think that Smallard looks a bit too squished and could stand being fleshed out a little more. Mallarge's body doesn't seem to connect too well to the head. It must be difficult working with such a small sprite, but a pixel or two could make all the difference.
Okay, I'll try fixing those.
New Smallard and Mallarge on my album. I've been slow with progress because of me trying to make moves.
Mallarge V3 looks fine. Smallard is better.
I've made a Skalloy. Something seems wrong with it, I just don't know what.
First frame
Second frame
I think the problem with Skalloy is that there is not enough room for the detail you're trying to put in. You could try to simplify it so that the shapes come out clearer.
I guess I'll try and fix it ASAP.
What detail do you mean? I don't see anything I can simplify, other than maybe the shading (yes, the edit button isn't there).
The main issue I see is with the body of the first frame, which seems a little too cramped.
How so?
It's probably to do with you doubling up on the pixels halfway through. One clever tactic you could try is to use a lighter shade there so that it doesn't give off such a jagged effect.
What do you mean by doubling up the pixels?
Edit: Nothing to do with Skalloy, but I made another icon, and didn't want to double post
Last edited by Tyrannigon64; 12-24-10 at 06:06 PM.
In your curve you use a two-pixel line which makes it look jagged. Atlaxa looks great!
Well, I just changed a couple of pixels, but I changed it a bit from what you said. By the time you read this, I'll have edited the comment so the pictures are here.
Edit:
Well, its breast is more full, which is nice, but you still have the jagged effect. It's less pronounced, but it's still thtere.
Unless you're talking about another part of it (like the wings or something) then I can't find any way to fix it. Sorry!
I made Mirrust.
I think the wispy stuff that isn't the hands is unnecessary. You can just remove it all and it'll still look pretty decent. Otherwise, a little big but so's the front sprite so I can't really blame you there.
I've got a recolor for the gym leader Froy but can't find a thread to post it so i'm gonna post it here
It'll probably take more than just giving him different clothes. People will immediately notice him to be a Volkner recolour.
It's been forever since I made an icon, hasn't it?