EXPLOUD has holes all over its body that can make sound. At its maximum volume, it can be heard hundreds of miles away.
A bit short, but it's something.
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EXPLOUD has holes all over its body that can make sound. At its maximum volume, it can be heard hundreds of miles away.
A bit short, but it's something.
Tried to add more flavor, not sure if it works.EXPLOUD has holes all over its body that resonate when it bellows. At its maximum volume, it can be heard hundreds of miles away.
Eh, still a bit short, but the flavor is nice!
Reworded the second sentence in an attempt to make it flow better. Its like passing a torch!EXPLOUD has holes all over its body that resonate when it bellows. Conversations between individuals can be heard hundreds of miles away.
EXPLOUD has holes all over its body that resonate when it bellows. Conversations between this POKEMON can be heard hundreds of miles away.
Heh, I like it.
Sounds better. It's still a bit short, but good enough for use.
Omma fan. +1
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